Correction of the essay

1. Correction of the essay

CORRECTION OF THE ESSAY
DONE BY: ALEX ^_^

2. The original essay #1

THE ORIGINAL ESSAY #1
• Hi Alice! How are you? What’s new? How you know I’m
in Ukraine now. I like ti live in this country. I’m studying in
the Yaroslav the Wise National Law University of Ukraine
in Kharkov. I have shorter hours of learning and more
time for relax than in England. Also we have longer
holidays thus we often go walking with my friends. My
Ukrainian friends friendlier and funnier. They have better
sense of humor than our people. People there more
reserved. I like local food. We very often eat cousine
dishes. It’s very tasty. Winter in Kharkov is more colder
than England but the summer is hotter. I really like this
city and my new friends. How about you? I look forward
your answer. With love, Jane.

3. Highlighted mistakes

HIGHLIGHTED MISTAKES
• Hi Alice! How are you? What’s new? How you know I’m
in Ukraine now. I like ti live in this country. I’m studying in
the Yaroslav the Wise National Law University of Ukraine
in Kharkov. I have shorter hours of learning and more
time for relax than in England. Also we have longer
holidays thus we often go walking with my friends. My
Ukrainian friends friendlier and funnier. They have better
sense of humor than our people. People there more
reserved. I like local food. We very often eat cousine
dishes. It’s very tasty. Winter in Kharkov is more colder
than England but the summer is hotter. I really like this
city and my new friends. How about you? I look forward
your answer. With love, Jane.

4. Corrected Mistakes

CORRECTED MISTAKES
• Hi Alice! How are you? What’s new? As you know I’m in
Ukraine now. I like to live in this country. I’m studying in
the Yaroslav the Wise National Law University of Ukraine
in Kharkov. I have less hours of learning and more time to
relax than in England. Also we have a lot more holidays
that’s why, we often go walking with my friends. My
Ukrainian friends nice, kind and funny. They have better
sense of humor than our people. People there more
reserved. I like local food. We very often eat cousine
dishes. It’s very tasty. Winter in Kharkov is more colder
than England but the summer is hotter. I really like this
city and my new friends. How about you? I look forward
your answer. With love, Jane.

5. Bit more detalies

BIT MORE DETALIES
• Hi Alice! How are you? What’s new? As you know I’m in Ukraine
now. I like to live here.Its really good country and I might stay here
for longer time. I’m studying in the Yaroslav the Wise National Law
University of Ukraine in Kharkov. Surprisingly I’ve learned the local
languages pretty fast, and now I study in Ukrainian & Russian. I
have less hours of learning, because classes are shorter here, so I
have more time to relax and have fun, then I used to in England.
Also we have a lot more holidays, that’s why we often go walking
with my friends. My Ukrainian friends nice, kind and funny. They
have better sense of humor than our people. People there more
reserved. I like local food, especially the sweets, they make really
good chocolate here. We very often eat cousine dishes. It’s very
tasty. Winter in Kharkov is more colder than England but for
people here winter is not cold at all. On the other hand summer is
very hot and beach is always full of people. I enjoy it a lot, I really
like this city and my new friends. How about you? I look forward
for your answer. With love, Jane.