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Англоязычная публикация
международного уровня: структура,
содержание, стиль (Часть 2)
Е.М. Базанова, канд. пед. наук, доцент
Президент Ассоциации экспертов по академическому письму
«Национальный консорциум центров письма»

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Структура научной статьи: метаданные
Заголовок
Title
Сведения об авторах
Имя О. Фамилия
Аффилиация
Information about
authors
Аннотация
Неструктурированная
Описательная
First Name / Surname
Affiliation
Abstract
Структурированная
Информативная
Unstructured
Structured
Descriptive
Informative
Графическая аннотация
Graphical abstract
Ключевые слова
Keywords
Основные положения
Highlights
Библиографический список
References

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Структура (исследовательской) статьи: IMRaD
Введение
Introduction
Методы (Теоретические основы)
Materials & Methods (Theoretical Basis)
Результаты
Results
Обсуждение
Discussion
Заключение
Conclusion
Благодарности
Acknowledgments

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5. 6. TITLES

ENGAGING:
INFORMATIVE

7.

8.

ENGAGING TITLES
Things to try:
Avoid predictable “academic verbs”, especially in participle form
preparing, promoting, enforcing, engaging, applying, improving, rethinking,
reopening, predicting, relating, analyzing, etc.

9.

ENGAGING TITLES
Things to try:
Include one or two words that you would not expect to find in any title in the
same journal
Concrete nouns
Vivid verbs
piano, guppy, path
ban, mutilate, gestate

10.

ENGAGING TITLES
Things to try:
Make sure your title contains no more than one or two abstract or collective nouns
Abstract nouns
Collective nouns
analysis, structure, development,
education
students, teachers, patients, patients,
subjects, alloys
Avoid predictable “academic verbs”, especially in participle form
preparing, promoting, enforcing, engaging, applying, improving, rethinking,
reopening, predicting, relating, analyzing, etc.
Include one or two words that you would not expect to find in any title in the
same journal
Concrete nouns
Vivid verbs
piano, guppy, path
ban, mutilate, gestate

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TITLES
Development of a Technical and Technological Solution for the Production of Carrot Nectar...
Investigation of the contact surfaces between the polymer matrix and metallic glasses in the composite materials
based on high density polyethylene
Study of the Effect of Sex and Type of Muscles on the Development of Quality Defects in Turkey Meat after the
Slaughter......
Preparation and investigation of the electrode material for supercapacitors via composite humic acids and
graphene oxide as a precursor
Analyzing performance of boring bars in machining by improving their damping properties using composite
material
Analysis of adsorption of COOh-functionalized multiwall carbon nanotubes

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TITLES
The Man Who Mistook His Wife for a Hat and
Other Clinical Tales
Oliver Sacks (neurologist, the journal
Brain)
Musicophilia: Tales of Music and the Brain
A Leg to Stand On
The Selfish Gene
The Blind Watchmaker
Climbing Mount Improbable
Richard Dawkins (evolutionary
biologist)

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TITLE
Broadly explains what the paper is about.

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TIPS
TITLE
Your title must be a direct, clear
invitation to a particular
conversation.
Broadly explains what the paper is about.
Papers with titles
between 31 and 40
characters are cited the most.
Titles containing
a comma or colon are
cited more.
Avoid question marks and
exclamation
marks. The title should convey the
most interesting and surprising new
results from the study.

15.

16.

AUTHOR(S)
Indicates the given name(s) and family name(s) of
each author.

17.

TIPS
AUTHOR(S)
Indicates the given name(s) and family name(s) of
each author.
The person who writes the
manuscript is usually the “first
author”. The second most
important position is the last
person of the list.
In between those two
critical positions, you will
find everyone else in
order of importance.
So the second position is
the third best, the third is the
fourth best, etc.

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19.

AFFILIATION
Presents the authors' affiliation addresses (where
the actual work was done).
Provides the full postal address of each affiliation,
including the country name and, if available, the email address of each author.
TIPS
An affiliation is an institution that pays
the authors for their work.
Authors can have multiple affiliations.
Be aware that each affiliation is
attributed a share of the author’s
scores. This means that an author
with affiliations in several countries will
not count fully in each.

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21.

ABSTRACT

22.

ABSTRACT

23.

ABSTRACT: Descriptive
– Short - usually less than 100 words.
– Includes:
• purpose of the work (objectives)
• method used
• scope of the work
– Doesn’t include:
• results, conclusions and
recommendations

24.

ABSTRACT: Informative
Fairly short – less than 250 words
– Includes:
• purpose of the work (objectives)
• method used
• scope of the work
• results
• conclusions and recommendations

25.

ABSTRACT: Structured
Make use of some version of the IMRD paper format, even when the
article itself is not a report of original research.

26.

ABSTRACT: Graphical
Unusual reactions mediated by FMN-dependent ene- and nitro-reductases
by Katarina Durchschein, Melanie Hall, Kurt Faber
Royal Society of Chemistry, Issue 7, 2013

27.

ABSTRACT: Examples
The state policy of the Russian Federation in the field of the healthy nutrition of the population includes a set
of measures aimed at meeting the needs of various groups of the population for healthy nutrition, taking into
account their traditions, habits and economic situation (45 words). The complex system development of the
consumer food market, in addition to the economic aspect, covers the issues of public health, demography,
effective nature management, resource saving and ecology (29 words). The current scientific approaches in
the field of healthy food production involve the addition of functional ingredients, biologically active
substances or probiotic microorganisms capable of replenishing the deficiency of necessary substances to a
base product (35 words). However, in addition to their high nutritional value, healthy food products must be
absolutely safe and be of high quality, which is extremely difficult to realize in the present conditions of raw
material production (34 words). The review provides a rationale that the organic products manufactured
using traditional technologies without the addition of chemical fertilizers, pesticides, food additives,
hormonal and other drugs, can be attributed to healthy food products (33 words). The development of the
organic sector of food production at the state level will allow not only to implement the adopted normative
acts within the framework of the state policy of healthy nutrition, but also to fundamentally improve the
situation in other areas: economy, health and ecology (47 words)
223 words

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ABSTRACT: Examples
Based on perspectives of the philosophy for science of dairy and postgenomic ideas the historical
aspects, an attempt has been made to formulate the paradigm of LactOmics as a logical generalization
of LipidOmics, ProteOmics and GlycOmics. The depth of experience is maintained thousands years. First
paper was published 400 years ago. Up-to-date concepts have been cluster formed. The technology
platform of LactOmics is based on the bio-nano-electromembrane technique of the dairy industry
modernization, as part of full import replacement with export orientation. This provides the national
Food safety for the entire range of dairy products for the determined population groups. (101 words)
1D Tubular-type and 3D diamond-like coordination polymers are formed upon combining pyridyl
appended p-tert-butyltetrathiacalix[4] arene in 1,3-alternate conformation tectons 4 and 5 with
mercury(II) chloride. (24 words)

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30.

KEYWORDS: Examples
Food safety; the mutual adaptation of agro-industrial complex technologies; system
technological complex; the synergetics of complex technological systems; the
interoperability, nonlinearity and instability of technological complexes; the selforganization of a technological complex; the mutual reinforcement of combined
technologies; the industrialization of agricultural technologies; the main provisions of
the paradigm for the development of agro-industrial complex technologies

31.

KEYWORDS: Examples
Diamond, necessity, use of force, Russia
Civilization
Regions
Forecasting
Resistance
Transportation
Network
Monitoring
Theory

32.

KEYWORDS: Examples
Diamond, necessity, use of force, Russia (law)
Civilization (Aviation and Aerospace)
Regions (Форсайт)
Forecasting (Приборостроение)
Resistance (Кардиология)
Transportation (Моделирование и анализ информационных систем)
Network (Моделирование и анализ информационных систем)
Monitoring (Неврологический журнал)
Theory (Political Studies)

33.

KEYWORDS
(Check the journal requirements)
TIPS
Avoid words with a broad meaning.
Use the words already included in the
title and the abstract.

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35.

HIGHLIGHTS
Provide a short collection of bullet points that
convey the core findings and provide readers with a
quick textual overview of the article.
TIPS
Include 3 to 5 highlights.
There should be a maximum
of 85 characters, including spaces, per
highlight.
Only core results of the paper should
be covered.

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HIGHLIGHTS

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38.

REFERENCES
Lists significant published works.
Cites all the scientific publications on which your
work is based.

39.

REFERENCES
Lists significant published works.
Cites all the scientific publications on which your
work is based.
TIPS
Before using citation management
software (EndNote, RefWorks,
Mendeley, etc.), check the journal's
requirements.
Cite papers from the journal to which
the paper will be submitted. Include
most recent papers from the domain.
Cite papers that other researchers in
your domain see as important and cite
often themselves.
Never cite what you have not read.

40.

Mendeley — бесплатная программа для управления
библиографической информацией, позволяющая хранить
и просматривать исследовательские труды в формате
PDF, а также имеющая подключение к международной
социальной сети учёных.
EndNote — коммерческая система управления
библиографической информацией, применяемая для
управления ссылками и библиографией, позволяющая
отформатировать их согласно многочисленным
стандартам цитирования.

41.

INTRODUCTION

42.

INTRODUCTION
TIPS
Use personal pronouns
(I/we) to announce the research and
principle findings.
Organize the introduction
from general background to specific,
relating to your research.

43.

44.

MATERIALS & METHODS
Describes (if necessary, defends) the
experimental design.
Provides enough detail so that a competent
worker can repeat the experiment.
Provides information that will let readers judge
the appropriateness of the experimental
methods.
Includes the exact technical specifications and
quantities and sources or methods of
preparation.
TIPS
Provide a short summary of the
research method(s).
Research aims, questions, hypothesis.
Describe where the research
took place and possible why.
Describe the procedure used to obtain
the data.
Limitations.
Do not repeat the details of
the established methods. List the
methods in the logical order in which
you conducted the research.
Avoid adding comments.

45.

RESULTS
Gives some kind of overall description of the
experiment, providing the big picture.
Provides representative data.
Constitutes the new knowledge that the author is
contributing to the world.
TIPS
Use personal pronouns (I/we) to
express your responsibility for
particular methodological decisions.
Use past tense when referring to your
results.
Use tables to present the actual
experimental results.
Use figures for comparisons of
experimental results with those of
previous works, or with
calculated/theoretical values.
Do not include references.

46.

RESULTS
Gives some kind of overall description of the
experiment, providing the big picture.
Provides representative data.
Constitutes the new knowledge that the author is
contributing to the world.

47.

48.

DISCUSSION
Presents the principles, relations, and
generalizations shown by your research findings.
Points out any exceptions or any lack of
correlation.
Shows how your results and interpretations agree
(or contrast) with previously published works.
Provides theoretical implications of your
research, as well as any possible practical
applications.
TIPS
Use personal pronouns (I/we) to claim
responsibility for findings that may
carry novelty to the scientific
community.
Use of the first person is generally
acceptable, but too much use of the
first person can actually distract the
reader from the main points.
Never ignore work in disagreement
with yours.

49.

CONCLUSION
Highlights key points in your analysis or results.
Notes important or unexpected implications
applied to practice. Summarizes your thoughts
and conveys the significance of your study and
the importance of your ideas. Identifies how a
gap in the literature has been addressed.
Introduces possible new or expanded ways of
thinking about the research problem. Offers new
insights and creative approaches for
the research problem based on the results of
your study.

50.

51.

ACKNOWLEGEMENTS
Acknowledges any significant technical help
received from any individual, as well as any
outside financial assistance, such as grants or
fellowships.

52.

ACKNOWLEGEMENTS
Acknowledges any significant technical help
received from any individual, as well as any
outside financial assistance, such as grants or
fellowships.
TIPS
Avoid the word "wish". Before
mentioning someone in
Acknowledgement, obtain permission
from him or her.

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MISCELLANEOUS: Modality
We may say that the interactional «in-between» becomes the source of operative
intentionality of interacting partners.
Instead of following this frequently discussed line of thought in contemporary
phenomenology, however, I would like to focus on another possibility of developing the
above considered views of mutual incorporation and participatory sense-making.
As far as I know, a relational ethics of the type hinted aptly by Torrance and Colombetti has
not been developed in the phenomenological tradition.
It seems plausible to conclude that the dynamics of care and mutual concern central to the
ethics of care might be well analysed and further developed in terms of phenomenological
and enactive views of intersubjectivity.
Under these circumstances, it seems useful to me to call attention to care ethics as an
already developed relational moral theory built on the idea of the centrality of the
relational domain. In this paper, my modest aim is to suggest a reason why
phenomenologists and care ethicists should care about each other.

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MISCELLANEOUS: AmE / BrE
In the process of mutual incorporation, we experience that there is not just
one center of gravity localized in one’s own lived body, but two or more of
them continuously oscillating between activity and receptivity. (175) Am.E
The paper concludes that the dynamics of care and mutual concern central to
the ethics of care might be well analysed and further developed in terms of
phenomenological and enactive views of intersubjectivity. (171) (Br.E)

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MISCELLANEOUS: Lack of Unity
Using the density functional theory method in the generalized gradient
approximation in this article, crystal structure and
properties of the carbon diamond-like LA10 phase, in which all the atomic
positions are crystallographically equivalent, were calculated…. It is also
established that the LA10 phase should be stable under normal conditions

56.

MISCELLANEOUS: Relative Clauses
Our authors are well-known specialists, researchers, representatives of the
Academies of Sciences, design bureaus, scientific and research institutes,
universities, space agencies, who work in the spheres theoretical and applied
aviation and astronautics.
At the close passage M loses one of its satellites, that is captured by Earth,
and becomes our Moon.

57.

MISCELLANEOUS: Agreement / Too many repetitions / Wrong
reference / Unclear sentences
Abstract. The themes of the work is connected with solving problems of
modeling in problem of the evolution of the Solar system. The new
astronomical hypothesis is built within scientific interpretation of some
history events. It is developing the first works of I. Velikovskiy. These events
are reflected in cosmogonies theory, based on archeological studies .It is given
the survey material on problems and methods of modeling in dynamics of the
interaction of the large cosmic object with the Earth, including
multidisciplinary processes of seizure of the body by Earth. It developed the
author's points in theory of evolutions.

58.

MISCELLANEOUS: Sloppy approach to writing
Abstract. A principle of probability balance of states is proposed for study of
non-stationary queuing system. System of equations for the balance in the
complex domain is derived and solved with the use of Laplace images. The
inverse Laplace transform is performed for the transition from images to
probabilities in the time domain. The developed method is recommended to
study non-stationary queueing systems under arbitrary distributions.
Keywords: система обслуживания, комплексная вероятность состояния,
изображение Лапласа, баланс состояний, система уравнений,
вероятность во временной области

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1-я Международная научно-практическая конференция
Academic Writing in a Global World: Current Challenges and
Future Perspectives
19-20 октября 2018 года
Москва
ЦЕЛИ КОНФЕРЕНЦИИ:
• повышение осведомленности о передовой практике и международных стандартах центров письма
• создание благоприятной среды для профессионального роста академиков и научной
коммуникации на всей территории России
• повышение профессионального роста российских авторов научных публикаций.
• совершенствование навыков академического письма и критического мышления на английском
языке
• управление публикационной деятельностью в образовательных и научных организациях
http://nwcc-conference.tilda.ws/#rec63554501

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