Учимся писать письмо

1.

Английский язык
Раздел 4. Письмо
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2.

Английский язык
39. You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen-friend Tom who
writes:
... In our city we have an annual competition for teenagers who make their
own short films. This year I got the second prize for a film about my
grandparents. Do you think it’s important to record family history? Who do
you think should do it? How can it be done best?
This month is my mom’s birthday and now I am thinking about a gift for her.
I want it to be very special...
Write a letter to Tom. In your letter:
• answer her questions,
• ask 3 questions about his mom.
Write 100—140 words.
Remember the rules of letter writing.
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3.

АДРЕС! ПРАВЫЙ ВЕРХНИЙ УГОЛ
Moscow
Russia
03/05/17
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4.

ПРИВЕТСТВИЕ+ВСТУПЛЕНИЕ
Moscow
Russia
03/05/17
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter! It’s always nice to hear from you again.
Sorry that I haven’t written for so long, but I was really busy with my
studies.
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5.

ОТВЕТЫ НА 3 ВОПРОСА
Moscow
Russia
03/05/17
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter! It’s always nice to hear from you again.
Sorry that I haven’t written for so long, but I was really busy with my
studies.
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6.

Английский язык
39. You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen-friend Tom who
writes:
... In our city we have an annual competition for teenagers who make their
own short films. This year I got the second prize for a film about my
grandparents. Do you think it’s important to record family history? Who
do you think should do it? How can it be done best?
This month is my mom’s birthday and now I am thinking about a gift for her.
I want it to be very special...
Write a letter to Tom. In your letter:
• answer her questions,
• ask 3 questions about his mom.
Write 100—140 words.
Remember the rules of letter writing.
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7.

ОТВЕТЫ НА 3 ВОПРОСА
Moscow
Russia
03/05/17
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter! It’s always nice to hear from you again.
Sorry that I haven’t written for so long, but I was really busy with my
studies.
Anyway, in your letter you asked my about family history. I’m sure
it’s really important to record family history.
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8.

Английский язык
39. You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen-friend Tom who
writes:
... In our city we have an annual competition for teenagers who make their
own short films. This year I got the second prize for a film about my
grandparents. Do you think it’s important to record family history?
Who do you think should do it? How can it be done best?
This month is my mom’s birthday and now I am thinking about a gift for her.
I want it to be very special...
Write a letter to Tom. In your letter:
• answer her questions,
• ask 3 questions about his mom.
Write 100—140 words.
Remember the rules of letter writing.
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9.

ОТВЕТЫ НА 3 ВОПРОСА
Moscow
Russia
03/05/17
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter! It’s always nice to hear from you again.
Sorry that I haven’t written for so long, but I was really busy with my
studies.
Anyway, in your letter you asked my about family history. I’m sure
it’s really important to record family history. Definitely, children and
grandchildren should do something to save family story.
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10.

Английский язык
39. You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen-friend Tom who
writes:
... In our city we have an annual competition for teenagers who make their
own short films. This year I got the second prize for a film about my
grandparents. Do you think it’s important to record family history?
Who do you think should do it? How can it be done best?
This month is my mom’s birthday and now I am thinking about a gift for her.
I want it to be very special...
Write a letter to Tom. In your letter:
• answer her questions,
• ask 3 questions about his mom.
Write 100—140 words.
Remember the rules of letter writing.
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11.

ОТВЕТЫ НА 3 ВОПРОСА
Moscow
Russia
03/05/17
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter! It’s always nice to hear from you again.
Sorry that I haven’t written for so long, but I was really busy with my
studies.
Anyway, in your letter you asked my about family history. I’m sure
it’s really important to record family history. Definitely, children and
grandchildren should do something to save family story.To do it best, they
can create albums with their family’s photos or record some videos with
their relatives.
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12.

Английский язык
39. You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen-friend Tom who
writes:
... In our city we have an annual competition for teenagers who make their
own short films. This year I got the second prize for a film about my
grandparents. Do you think it’s important to record family history?
Who do you think should do it? How can it be done best?
This month is my mom’s birthday and now I am thinking about a gift for
her.
I want it to be very special...
Write a letter to Tom. In your letter:
• answer her questions,
• ask 3 questions about his mom.
Write 100—140 words.
Remember the rules of letter writing.
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13.

ЗАДАЕМ 3 ВОПРОСА ПО ТЕМЕ
Moscow
Russia
03/05/17
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter! It’s always nice to hear from you again.
Sorry that I haven’t written for so long, but I was really busy with my
studies.
Anyway, in your letter you asked my about family history. I’m sure
it’s really important to record family history. Definitely, children and
grandchildren should do something to save family story.To do it best, they
can create albums with their family’s photos or record some videos with
their relatives.
Congrats with your mum’s upcoming birthday! How old is your
mum? Does she like hand-made presents? ? Is she going to celebrate her
birthday?
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14.

ЗАКЛЮЧЕНИЕ
Moscow
Russia
03/05/17
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter! It’s always nice to hear from you again. Sorry that I
haven’t written for so long, but I was really busy with my studies.
Anyway, in your letter you asked my about family history. I’m sure it’s
really important to record family history. Definitely, children and grandchildren
should do something to save family story.To do it best, they can create albums
with their family’s photos or record some videos with their relatives.
Congrats with your mum’s upcoming birthday! How old is your mum?
Does she like hand-made presents? ? Is she going to celebrate her birthday?
Sorry, I have to go now because I have a lot of homework to do. Drop
me a line!
Yours,
Kate
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15.

ПРОВЕРЯЕМ ПО КРИТЕРИЯМ
К1 Содержание (слов 130!)
Благодарность за письмо и извинение, что не писал
раньше (ссылка на предыдущие контакты)
Ответы на 3 вопроса
3 вопроса по теме письма заданы (и в правильном
времени)
Надежда на последующие контакты
К2 Организация
Адрес в правом верхнем углу
Дата под адресом
Приветствие, заключительная фраза и прощание
Деление на абзацы (4 абзаца, отступ)
Вводные слова, логика высказывания
К3 Лексика и Грамматика
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16.

Английский язык
40. Comment on the following statement:
Some young people believe that while at school we should concentrate
on studying; others think that working part-time has many advantages.
What is your opinion?
Write 200–250 words.
Use the following plan:
• make an introduction (state the problem);
• express your personal opinion and give 2–3 reasons for your opinion;
• express an opposing opinion and give 1–2 reasons for this opposing
opinion;
• explain why you do not agree with the opposing opinion;
• make a conclusion restating your position.
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17.

Английский язык
Some young people believe that while at school we should concentrate
on studying; others think that working part-time has many advantages.
ПЛАН (АРГУМЕНТЫ)
STUDYING
WORKING PART-TIME
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18.

Английский язык
Some young people believe that while at school we should concentrate
on studying; others think that working part-time has many advantages.
ПЛАН (АРГУМЕНТЫ)
STUDYING
• Education=investment
future job
• Lack of time
WORKING PART-TIME
in • Working experience
• Pocket money
• Useful acquaitances
КОНТР
• Education
does
not
guarantee highly-paid job
• Time-management
(responsibility)
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19.

Английский язык
Some young people believe that while at school we should concentrate
on studying; others think that working part-time has many advantages.
1. Intro Постановка проблемы (две точки
зрения), переформулирование темы эссе из КИМа
It has become fashionable for some young people argue that
while at school we should focus mainly on studying. However,
there are others, who think that working part-time is a good
option how to spend your time and energy while at school or
university.
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20.

Английский язык
Some young people believe that while at school we should concentrate
on studying; others think that working part-time has many advantages.
2. Your opinion + 2 arguments
To my way of thinking, it is better decision to try part-time job
than dedicate all time to studying.There are many things to be
said in favour of this point of view. Firstly, you can attempt
working in a sphere that you are interested in.You can learn
more about professional skills and decide if you want to work in
this area in your future. Secondly, you can earn some money
and become more financially independent from your parents.
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21.

Английский язык
Some young people believe that while at school we should concentrate
on studying; others think that working part-time has many advantages.
3. Another opinion + 1 argument
However, there are other young people, who claim that while we
are studying at school, we should not work. These people are
convinced that it is better to get higher education at first and
then find a well-paid job. In their opinion, if you work, you do
not have enough time to concentrate on studying and you have
bad marks at school.
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22.

Английский язык
Some young people believe that while at school we should concentrate
on studying; others think that working part-time has many advantages.
4. Contrargument
I cannot agree with this opinion. As for me, when you work you
learn to organize your time and become more responsible.
Time-management is a key to successful combination of working
and studying at the same time.
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23.

Английский язык
Some young people believe that while at school we should concentrate
on studying; others think that working part-time has many advantages.
5. Conclusion (с подтверждением позиции
автора)
To sum up, I want to underline that for me it is absolutely
acceptable to study and school or university and have part-time
job that gives you experience and extra money. But it is up for
everybody do decide whether to work while studying or not.
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24.

Английский язык
It has become fashionable for some young people argue that while at school we
should focus mainly on studying. However, there are others, who think that working parttime is a good option how to spend your time and energy while at school or university.
To my way of thinking, it is better decision to try part-time job than dedicate all
time to studying. There are many things to be said in favour of this point of view. Firstly, you
can attempt working in a sphere that you are interested in. You can learn more about
professional skills and decide if you want to work in this area in your future. Secondly, you
can earn some money and become more financially independent from your parents.
However, there are other young people, who claim that while we are studying at
school, we should not work. These people are convinced that it is better to get higher
education at first and then find a well-paid job. In their opinion, if you work, you do not have
enough time to concentrate on studying and you have bad marks at school.
I cannot agree with this opinion. As for me, when you work you learn to organize
your time and become more responsible. Time-management is a key to successful
combination of working and studying at the same time.
To sum up, I want to underline that for me it is absolutely acceptable to study and
school or university and have part-time job that gives you experience and extra money. But it
is up for everybody do decide whether to work while studying or not.
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25.

ПРОВЕРЯЕМ ПО КРИТЕРИЯМ
К1 Содержание (слов 260! Структура 2-1-1)
Введение – постановка проблемы. Фразы из КИМа
переформулированы
Мнение автора + аргумент 2 штуки
Мнение против +аргумент 1 штука
Контраргумент – 1 штука
Заключение с подтерждением позиции автора
К2 Организация
5 абзацев
Логика
Вводные слова
К3 Лексика
Уровень лексики
Лексический ошибки
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26.

ПРОВЕРЯЕМ ПО КРИТЕРИЯМ
К4 Грамматика
Грамматические ошибки (времена, лицо/число,
вспомогательные глаголы, окончания глаголов,
множественное число сущ, артикли)
К4 Орфография и пунктуация
Написание слов
Запятые (после вводных слов!)
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27.

Английский язык
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