Modern technologies make life more convenient (ЕГЭ С2)

1. ЕГЭ С2

Сочинение с выражением
мнения
Modern technologies make life
more convenient

2. Структура сочинения

1абзац:
краткая постановка
проблемы (обозначить
обсуждаемую проблему,
перефразировав задание и
указав ее актуальность; объем
20-35 слов)

3.

Now that we have entered the 21st
century, we cannot imagine our lives
without new machines, equipment, and
devices. Some people say that advances in
technology make our lives easier and save
our time and money, while others believe
that they have a lot of drawbacks. The
question arises whether technology is a
blessing or a curse.

4.

2
абзац: необходимо
сформулировать личное мнение
автора по рассматриваемой теме,
с указанием 2-3 развернутых
аргументов, которые должны
лежать в разных плоскостях
(социальной, экономической,
моральной, психологической и
т.д.)

5.

To my mind, new technologies have
numerous benefits to mankind. Firstly, they
allow people to access and download a vast
and
diverse
amount
of
up-to-date
information.
Secondly,
communication
technologies enable us to stay in constant
touch with our colleagues, friends, and
family members. In addition, the use of new
technologies in industry has led to cheaper
production of various goods.

6.

3
абзац: противоположная
точка зрения по данной
проблеме с указанием 1-2
аргументов

7.

However, some people are convinced that
modern technologies have negative health,
environmental and economic effects. First of
all, technology may cause health problems,
including eye strain, obesity, and heart
problems. Secondly, waste from technology
pollutes the environment. What is more, the
use
of
new
technologies
leads
to
unemployment and job losses.

8.

4
абзац: почему автор не
согласен с этим мнением,
указав контраргументы на
аргументы людей,
поддерживающих
противоположную точку
зрения.

9.

Anyway, I think that technology increases
efficiency and productivity. For instance, new
equipment allows people to produce more
food and goods with less work. Besides, as
technology improves, people can receive
better medical treatment and survive many
diseases.
Additionally,
environmentally
friendly technology uses a lot of methods for
reducing the human impact on the Earth.

10.

5
абзац: заключение,
содержащее обобщающий
вывод и отстаивание
собственной позиции автора,
несмотря на возможно
разумные доводы
противоположной точки
зрения (20 -30 слов)

11.

To sum up, technology has a significant
impact on society. Modern technology has
improved human longevity and health and
allowed
people
to
achieve
different
commercial and industrial goals. I think that
new technologies have improved many
areas of life and allowed us to live more
comfortably.

12. Средства организации текста

1)
Слова и фразы,
структурирующие аргументы и
рассуждения в логической
последовательности,
указывающие на приоритетные,
второстепенные и
дополнительные факты.

13. например

Firstly\
first of all, secondly, thirdly
or finally, what is next
To begin with\ for the start\ what
matters more in this case,
moreover, besides, more than that,
in addition to it, what is more

14. Средства выражения собственного мнения

Personally I think, from my point of view,
it seems to me, I side with those who
think, I’m in favour of, it’s unwise to
deny that, as for me, there’s no doubt, it
goes without saying, undoubtedly, it
cannot be denied that, I must admit that,
I’m absolutely sure that, to my mind, in
my opinion, as I view it, I have a clear
position on the issue, to stress my
position I should say that

15. Лексические средства выражения противоположной точки зрения

Still
other people think
differently\have another opinion\
have a contrary point of view
However, nevertheless, although,
still my point of view isn’t the only
one, to the mind of some other
people, still not all people share my
opinion, it’s quite natural that there
is a contrary perception of the
problem

16. Выражение несогласия с другим мнением

I
must say that I can’t (totally) agree
with them, I can’t fully agree with
them, I believe they are right to
some extent but, it would be unwise
to totally disagree with them but, I
can’t share their opinion, I have
some reasons to disagree with them,
I suppose they are wrong thinking
so, this idea seems absurd to me, I
can’t but disagree with them

17. Выражение причинно-следственных связей

For
this reason, that’s why,
therefore, thus, because of this,
as a result of, due to, as a
consequence of, it may result in,
it may be the reason for, so, so
as to( not to)

18. заключение

To
sum it up, to draw the line, in
the end, to conclude, in
conclusion, on this basis, I’d like
to stress that, all in all I believe
that, now I’d like to summarize,
judging all the above,
summarizing both opinions I still
insist on

19. Как сделать сочинение ярким?

Дозированно
и разумно
использовать аутентичные
пословицы и поговорки.
Идиоматические выражения,
наиболее подходящие для
данного контекста.