«Конструктор» эссе (задание 38, эссе на основе графиков)

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«Конструктор» эссе
(задание 38,
эссе на основе графиков)

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Эссе 1.
Use the following plan:
– make an opening statement on the subject of the project;
– select and report 2–3 facts;
– make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;
– a problem with studying classical music
your opinion on the importance of listening to classical music.

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Эссе 2.

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1. The aim of my project is to
find
out
what
Russian
composers are popular with
Zetland Music students. As part
of my project, I have found some
results of relevant opinion polls,
and in this essay I will analyse
the data and express my opinion
on the subject of the project.
1. The aim of my project is to
find out what Russian writers
are popular with Zetland
Humanities students. As part of
my project, I have found some
results of relevant opinion polls,
and in this essay I will analyse
the data and express my opinion
on the subject of the project.

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2. According to the data, the two
most common responses to the
opinion poll question “Who is your
favourite Russian composer?” are
Pyotr Tchaikovsky and Igor
Stravinsky, at 30% and 29%
respectively. Dmitri Shostakovich
comes third with 21% of the vote,
and Sergei Prokofiev and Nikolai
Rimsky-Korsakov rank the lowest,
making up 12% and 8%
respectively.
2. According to the data, the two
most common responses to the
opinion poll question “Who is your
favourite Russian writer?” are Leo
Tolstoy and Fedor Dostoevsky, at
30% and 29% respectively. Mikhail
Bulgakov comes third with 21% of
the vote, and Ivan Turgenev and
Alexander Pushkin rank the lowest,
making up 12% and 8%
respectively.

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3. Surprisingly, there is quite a
considerable difference between
the figure for Pyotr Tchaikovsky
and that for Nikolai RimskyKorsakov: the former is more than
three times as high as the latter. I
find this surprising because Pyotr
Tchaikovsky and Nikolai RimskyKorsakov are two of the greatest
composers of all time and both are
recognized internationally for their
remarkable musical masterpieces.
3. Surprisingly, there is quite a
considerable difference between
the figure for Leo Tolstoy and that
for Alexander Pushkin: the former
is more than three times as high
as the latter. I find this surprising
because Leo Tolstoy and Alexander
Pushkin are two of the greatest
writers of all time and both
are recognized internationally for
their
remarkable
literary
masterpieces.

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4. Unfortunately, there can be
some problems with studying
classical music. One problem is
that classical music is a very
complex and difficult subject to
study. A good solution is to find a
well-qualified and experienced
teacher who can make this
subject more manageable for
music students and keep them
motivated.
4. Unfortunately, there can be some
problems with reading the classics in
translation. The main problem is that
some important features of classical
literature may get lost in translation,
which can make reading the translated
versions of original texts difficult. A
good solution is to choose the books
translated by the most professional
and experienced translators who
ensure accuracy in translation and
preserve the meaning.

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5. In conclusion, I would like to say
that listening to classical music is
important because it benefits
people in many different ways. I
have no doubt about it because
my personal experience of
listening to classical music pieces
proves it.
5. In conclusion, I would like to say
that reading classical literature is
important because it benefits
people in terms of language skills,
cultural and historical knowledge. I
have no doubt about it because
my personal experience of reading
the classics proves it.

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Эссе 1
Финальный вариант:
1. The aim of my project is to find out what Russian composers
are popular with Zetland Music students. As part of my project, I
have found some results of relevant opinion polls, and in this
essay, I will analyse the data and express my opinion on the
subject of the project.
2. According to the data, the two most common responses to
the opinion poll question “Who is your favourite Russian
composer?” are Pyotr Tchaikovsky and Igor Stravinsky, at 30%
and 29% respectively. Dmitri Shostakovich comes third with 21%
of the vote, and Sergei Prokofiev and Nikolai Rimsky-Korsakov
rank the lowest, making up 12% and 8% respectively.
3. Surprisingly, there is quite a considerable difference between
the figure for Pyotr Tchaikovsky and that for Nikolai RimskyKorsakov: the former is more than three times as high as the
latter. I find this surprising because Pyotr Tchaikovsky and Nikolai
Rimsky-Korsakov are two of the most popular composers of all
time and both are recognized internationally for their remarkable
musical masterpieces.
4. Unfortunately, there can be some problems with studying
classical music. One problem is that classical music is a very
complex and difficult subject to study. A good solution to this
problem is to find a well-qualified and experienced teacher who
can make this subject more manageable for music students and
keep them motivated.
5. In conclusion, I would like to say that listening to classical
music is important because it benefits people in many different
ways. I have no doubt about it because my personal experience
of listening to classical music pieces proves it. (258 w.)
Эссе 2
1. The aim of my project is to find out what Russian writers are
popular with Zetland Humanities students. As part of my project,
I have found some results of relevant opinion polls, and in this
essay, I will analyse the data and express my opinion on the
subject of the project.
2. According to the data, the two most common responses to the
opinion poll question, “Who is your favourite Russian writer?” are
Leo Tolstoy and Fedor Dostoevsky, at 30% and 29% respectively.
Mikhail Bulgakov comes third with 21% of the vote, and Ivan
Turgenev and Alexander Pushkin rank the lowest, making up 12%
and 8% respectively.
3. Surprisingly, there is quite a considerable difference between
the figure for Leo Tolstoy and that for Alexander Pushkin: the
former is more than three times as high as the latter. I find this
surprising because Leo Tolstoy and Alexander Pushkin are two of
the greatest writers of all time and both are recognized
internationally for their remarkable literary masterpieces.
4. Unfortunately, there can be some problems with reading the
classics in translation. The main problem is that some important
features of classical literature may get lost in translation, which
can make reading the translated versions of original texts
difficult. A good solution is to choose books translated by the
most professional and experienced translators who ensure
accuracy in translation and preserve the original meaning.
5. In conclusion, I would like to say that reading classical
literature is important because it benefits people in terms of
language skills, cultural and historical knowledge. I have no doubt
about it because my personal experience of reading the classics
proves it. (271 w.)

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